Animatic done (again)

Now it's REALLY done. I've made some changes in time for this week's presentation and the feedback was more positive. I've stripped the story down to it's PUREST purest form.

TWO cafés, both alike in dignity

What a BARGAIN

Sausage? With GLoop??? It's ungodly

Cross - cafe tensions rise

With deadly consequences

The folly of man is revealed

I'm done with it. It's going to be incredible. I'm glad I've changed it so much because it's taught me a lot about what people respond to and how to tweak things, but it's been a painful process.

I'm looking forward to taking it forward. I'm going to spend some time with my character designer next to ensure that the Gloop Cafe clientele and the Sossidge Diner clientele look distinct