Animatic and Rewrites (Trial and Many Errors)

As animatic maker, I made the animatic. But it wasn't brilliantly received by my peers for being too cluttered and unfocused.

I should work on adding detail to the characters. I'm pleased with the blocking and camerawork but without facial expressions it's harder to understand. I'm also struggling to assert myself in my group as I'm bad at saying "no" to ideas I think would be detrimental to the story.

I cut a shot where a hand throws the meteor out of a space portal as it detracts from the focus of the story.

I'm more pleased with the new animatic. It's more focused on the original concept of the President fulfilling his gardening dream in his final moments, BUT it still needs work and I need to meet with my group to discuss it.

I doubt that this will be the finished animatic but I've promised myself to have it completed and approved by my group by next Friday.